My first poetry by me

"PPSA"
When the sun ashamed to appear alone,
We always get up closer to The Lord of Universe
When the world drunk in song and dance
we still keep our heart in dikhr and prayer
when the whole focus in their rotation and revolution
we focus on science and looking for the light of truth
sometimes we thought
"are we left behind?" or
"are we imprisoned?"
but now throw away that thinking,
we must grow up, don't worry
We are generation of messenger fans
we are future expectations
we are independent peoplewe are not slave of world that wil shattered
oh how big the challege of future
our country depend on us and need us
as the next generation with spirit intelligent & tawadhu
also ready to work hard for each other

(poetry make me feel little confident, its better than before, okey give me feedback please, thanks,,I think its really have many mistake,little smooth, )